One sunday afternoon last winter (....wich month...?) i decided to go with a friend of mine (..who?..) for a bike ride(where to?) it was very cold (give more details) we were eyeling along a country lane when we saw some children playing on a frozen pond (how old were they? what sort of things were they doing?)
Suddenly we heard a shout.To our horror one of the boys (wich one?) had fallen trough the ice! (Why?What had happened?)
We immediately rushed over to help but it was too dangerous to walk across the ice (what was the boy doing?) My friend and I ran to borrow a ladder (Where from?) I put the ladder on the ice and crawled (how?) across it towards the boy. (What was the boy doing now?) I caught hold of his hand and finally managed to pull him out of the icy water .Luckly the boy wasn't hurt ,just very frightened
His parents turned up about ten minutes later .When they saw him ( Where?How did he look?) they were shocked and very angry with him!
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January / Robert / In the park / And it was snowing / They were 15 years old / Because he slipped / The one in white / Because he stepped on thin ice / He was struggling to get out / From a farm nearby / Gently / He came to me / Frozen.  Sper sa te ajute.
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